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<head>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8">
<meta name="author" content="Patrick 'P. J.' McDermott <mailto:pjm@nac.net>">
- <meta name="description" content="The resume, software, and essays of P. J. McDermott -- a computer science student, software and (amateur) hardware hacker, and advocate for software and cultural freedom.">
+ <meta name="description" content="The resume, software, and essays of P. J. McDermott -- a software and hardware hacker and advocate for software and cultural freedom.">
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<title>P. J. McDermott</title>
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<div class="header">
<a href="#body" class="skip">Skip to body</a>
<h1><a href="/">P. J. M<span class="super">c</span>Dermott</a></h1>
- <p>Computer science student, software and (amateur) hardware hacker, and advocate for software and cultural freedom.</p>
+ <p>Software and hardware hacker and advocate for software and cultural freedom.</p>
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<li>A competent software author.</li>
<li>A fan of freely- and semi-freely-licensed heavy metal and rock
music.</li>
- <li>An undergraduate computer science student.</li>
+ <li>A recent university graduate with a degree in computer science.</li>
<li>A self-taught student of U.S. and international copyright law and free
software licensing.</li>
- <li>The leader of my university's undergraduate GNU/Linux special interest
- group.</li>
+ <li>The former leader of my university's undergraduate GNU/Linux special
+ interest group.</li>
<li>Trained in karate.</li>
<li>Licensed to operate motorboats.</li>
<li>Certified for open water SCUBA diving.</li>