From cfc57f57c61bfaf253175f5540149a6fed8fc559 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: P. J. McDermott <pjm@nac.net>
Date: Fri, 11 Nov 2011 21:35:07 -0500
Subject: Improve design by feedback.

  * With regret, removed the "four freedoms", another "wall of text".
  * Moved the "message of the day" to the top and rearranged the
    desktops and logos.
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