From 661bd8a67967c4e80cb6fd156f153f65dbf54456 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francis Rowe <info@gluglug.org.uk>
Date: Wed, 15 Jul 2015 04:50:10 -0400
Subject: really improve the home page

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(limited to 'site/index.php')

diff --git a/site/index.php b/site/index.php
index 876ea71..47c8b3f 100644
--- a/site/index.php
+++ b/site/index.php
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
 		</p>
 		<h1><?php echo gettext("Libreboot project"); ?></h1>
 			<p>
-				Libreboot is a <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/what-is-free-software">free</a> (libre) boot firmware,
-				replacing the proprietary <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BIOS">BIOS</a>/<a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unified_Extensible_Firmware_Interface">UEFI</a>, based on <a href="http://coreboot.org/">coreboot</a>.
+				Libreboot is a <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/what-is-free-software">free</a> (libre) boot firmware based on <a href="http://coreboot.org/">coreboot</a>,
+				intended to replace the proprietary <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BIOS">BIOS</a>/<a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unified_Extensible_Firmware_Interface">UEFI</a> firmware.
 				Boot firmware is the low-level software that runs when you turn your computer on, which initializes the
 				hardware and starts a bootloader for your operating system. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
 			</p>
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 			</ul>
 			<ul>
 				<li><a href="docs/index.html"><?php echo gettext("Documentation"); ?></a></li>
-				<li><a href="docs/hcl/index.html#supported_list"><?php echo gettext("Compatibility list"); ?></a></li>
+				<li><a href="docs/hcl/index.html#supported_list"><?php echo gettext("List of supported systems"); ?></a></li>
 				<li><a href="docs/install/index.html"><?php echo gettext("How to install libreboot"); ?></a></li>
 				<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_boot_installer.html"><?php echo gettext("How to install GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
 				<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html"><?php echo gettext("How to boot GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
@@ -70,15 +70,20 @@
 			<h2 id="howtohelp">How to help?</h2>
 				<ul>
 					<li><a href="docs/tasks.html">List of tasks that need to be completed</a></li>
-					<li><a href="docs/maintain/index.html">Maintaining libreboot</a></li>
+					<li><a href="docs/maintain/index.html">How to maintain libreboot</a></li>
 				</ul>
 			<h2>Pre-configured libreboot systems</h2>
 				<p>
 					<?php echo gettext("Pre-configured libreboot systems are also available, from several <a href='suppliers/'>commercial suppliers</a>."); ?>
 				</p>
-			<h2 id="contact"><?php echo gettext("Contact"); ?></h2>
+				<p>
+					These systems come with libreboot pre-installed, where everything works out of the box. This is useful, for those who
+					do not want to install the software on their own, but still want to use it. All of the companies on this list are
+					dedicated to the GNU free software philosophy, and are running projects of their own to achieve those goals.
+				</p>
+			<h2 id="contact"><?php echo gettext("Contact the libreboot project"); ?></h2>
 				<ul>
-					<li><a href="contrib/"><?php echo gettext("Maintainers"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="contrib/"><?php echo gettext("List of maintainers"); ?></a></li>
 					<li><a href="<?php echo $userMailingListAddress; ?>"><?php echo gettext("Mailing list"); ?></a></li>
 					<li><a href="<?php echo $devMailingListAddress; ?>"><?php echo gettext("Dev mailing list"); ?></a></li>
 					<li><a href="<?php echo $ircChannelAddress; ?>"><?php echo $ircChannelName; ?></a></li>
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