From 78067dd62a285731305b7a890da333d265ce6cad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Francis Rowe Date: Sun, 18 Jan 2015 06:57:44 -0500 Subject: Documentation: fix incorrect usage of apostrophes. --- (limited to 'docs/gnulinux') diff --git a/docs/gnulinux/configuring_parabola.html b/docs/gnulinux/configuring_parabola.html index 270d2bb..e3c9239 100644 --- a/docs/gnulinux/configuring_parabola.html +++ b/docs/gnulinux/configuring_parabola.html @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ and more maintenance work.

- The Arch forum can also be useful, if others have the same issue as you (if you encounter issues, that is). Parabola's + The Arch forum can also be useful, if others have the same issue as you (if you encounter issues, that is). The Parabola IRC channel (#parabola on freenode) can also help you.

@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@

- You'll note that I set both lines; the 2nd line is for IPv6. More and more ISP's are providing this now (mine does) + You'll note that I set both lines; the 2nd line is for IPv6. More and more ISPs are providing this now (mine does) so it's good to be forward-thinking here.

@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ This is important, so make sure to read them!

- Install smartmontools (can be used to check smart data - note: HDD's use non-free firmware inside, it's transparent to you + Install smartmontools (it can be used to check smart data. HDDs use non-free firmware inside, but it's transparent to you but the smart data comes from it. Therefore, don't rely on it too much):
# pacman -S smartmontools
Read https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/S.M.A.R.T. to learn how to use it. diff --git a/docs/gnulinux/encrypted_trisquel.html b/docs/gnulinux/encrypted_trisquel.html index 1cca4f0..7f80272 100644 --- a/docs/gnulinux/encrypted_trisquel.html +++ b/docs/gnulinux/encrypted_trisquel.html @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Libreboot uses the GRUB payload by default, which means that the GRUB configuration file (where your GRUB menu comes from) is stored directly alongside libreboot - and it's GRUB payload executable, inside + and its GRUB payload executable, inside the flash chip. In context, this means that installing distributions and managing them is handled slightly differently compared to traditional BIOS systems.

diff --git a/docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html b/docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html index 8b5a8a6..5fb46dc 100644 --- a/docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html +++ b/docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ filesystem inside called CBFS (coreboot filesystem). A utility called 'cbfstool' allows you to change the contents of the ROM image. In this case, libreboot is configured such that the 'grub.cfg' and 'grubtest.cfg' files exists directly inside CBFS instead of - inside the GRUB payload's 'memdisk' (which is itself stored in CBFS). + inside the GRUB payload 'memdisk' (which is itself stored in CBFS).

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@

Which ROM image should I use?

- You can work directly with one of the ROM's already included in the libreboot ROM archives. For the purpose of + You can work directly with one of the ROM images already included in the libreboot ROM archives. For the purpose of this tutorial it is assumed that your ROM is named libreboot.rom so please make sure to adapt.

@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@

If you currently have flashed a ROM image from an older version, it is recommended to update first: - basically, modify one of the latest ROM's and then flash it. + basically, modify one of the latest ROM images and then flash it.

@@ -191,8 +191,8 @@ Yours might be different. In GRUB terms, sda means ahci0. 1 means msdos1, or gpt1, depending on whether I am using MBR or GPT partitioning. Thus, /dev/sda1 is GRUB is (ahci0,msdos1) or (ahci0,gpt1). In my case, I use MBR partitioning so it's (ahci0,msdos1). - 'msdos' is GRUB's name simply because this partitioning type is traditionally used by MS-DOS. - It doesn't mean you have a proprietary OS. + 'msdos' is a GRUB name simply because this partitioning type is traditionally used by MS-DOS. + It doesn't mean that you have a proprietary OS.

@@ -209,14 +209,14 @@

- For the GRUB payload's grubtest.cfg (in the 'Load Operating System' menu entry), we therefore have (in this example):
+ For the GRUB payload grubtest.cfg (in the 'Load Operating System' menu entry), we therefore have (in this example):
set root='ahci0,msdos1'
linux /vmlinuz root=UUID=3a008e14-4871-497b-95e5-fb180f277951
initrd /initrd.img

- Optionally, you can convert the UUID to it's real device name, for example /dev/sda1 in this case. + Optionally, you can convert the UUID to its real device name, for example /dev/sda1 in this case. sdX naming isn't very reliable, though, which is why UUID is used for most distributions.

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