From 7d0f7592029de07fa26e3ca6cf511742d9bf560d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francis Rowe <fchmmr@minifree.lan>
Date: Thu, 26 Nov 2015 14:03:18 -0500
Subject: home page: use better language in the second paragraph

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diff --git a/site/index.php b/site/index.php
index 46ab81a..aebe07d 100644
--- a/site/index.php
+++ b/site/index.php
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@
 				promote freedom; <em>please call libreboot <strong><a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a></strong></em>. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
 			</p>
 			<p>
-				Most people rely on <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">proprietary</a> boot firmware, even if they
-				use <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/">GNU/Linux</a>. Libreboot joins <a href="https://gnu.org/">GNU</a> in creating
-				a world where all can use, study, adapt and share software, providing true control and ownership over technology.
+				Many people use <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">non-free</a> firmware, even if they
+				use <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/">GNU/Linux</a>. Libreboot joins <a href="https://gnu.org/">GNU</a> in building
+				a world where everyone can use, study, adapt and share software, with true control and ownership over their technology.
 			</p>
 			<p>
 				<strong><em>FCC in the USA is trying to *ban* free WiFi devices!
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