From 1f27e1756fdd0610cc6205f50d68a9afe8095629 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francis Rowe <info@gluglug.org.uk>
Date: Mon, 02 Mar 2015 10:35:06 -0500
Subject: Improve the description on the home page

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(limited to 'site')

diff --git a/site/index.php b/site/index.php
index 13c8967..f751cd5 100644
--- a/site/index.php
+++ b/site/index.php
@@ -59,11 +59,11 @@
 					<p>
 						We believe that everyone deserves the freedom to study, alter and improve technology,
 						to use it freely without restriction. The goal is identical to that of the <a href="https://fsf.org/">Free Software Foundation</a>,
-						which is to eliminate all <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">proprietary software</a> so that everything you need to do on a computer can be done
-						exclusively with free software.
+						which is to ensure that everything you need to do on a computer can be done exclusively
+						with free software.
 					</p>
 					<p>
-						<?php echo $lbProjectNameCapitalized; ?> also has many practical advantages over proprietary boot firmware, 
+						<?php echo $lbProjectNameCapitalized; ?> also has many practical advantages over <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">proprietary</a> boot firmware, 
 						such as faster boot speeds and better security. Since the source code is public and fully auditable,
 						malicious features such as backdoors (common in proprietary firmware) are unlikely to exist. You can
 						<a href="docs/gnulinux/index.html">install GNU/Linux with encrypted /boot/</a>,
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