From ac4f3b4d7ff064b1d1ad31b5686ef3917811cbac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francis Rowe <fchmmr@minifree.lan>
Date: Thu, 26 Nov 2015 13:09:31 -0500
Subject: simplify the home page and make it more readable

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index a6eca5e..ed676a7 100644
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@@ -39,40 +39,36 @@
 		</p>
 		<h1><?php echo gettext("Libreboot project"); ?></h1>
 			<p>
-				Libreboot is a free BIOS or UEFI firmware replacement (<a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free as in freedom</a>).
-				We refer to libreboot as <em>boot firmware</em>, low-level software
-				that runs when you turn your computer on, which initializes the hardware and starts a bootloader for your operating system. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
+				Libreboot is a free BIOS or UEFI replacement (<a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free as in freedom</a>);
+				low-level <em>boot firmware</em> that initializes the hardware and starts a bootloader for your operating
+				system.
+				It's also an open source BIOS, but open source <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/open-source-misses-the-point.html">fails</a> to
+				promote freedom; <em>please call libreboot <strong><a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a></strong></em>. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
 			</p>
 			<p>
-				Libreboot also qualifies as an open source BIOS or UEFI firmware replacement, but we prefer the term <em><a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a></em>. Open source merely talks about
-				access to source code, but <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/open-source-misses-the-point.html">fails</a> to teach users to value their freedom.
+				Most people rely on <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">proprietary</a> boot firmware, even if they
+				use <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/">GNU/Linux</a>. Libreboot joins <a href="https://gnu.org/">GNU</a> in creating
+				a world where all can use, study, adapt and share software, providing true control and ownership over technology.
 			</p>
 			<p>
-				Most people rely on <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary/">proprietary</a> boot firmware, even if they use free
-				operating systems like <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/">GNU/Linux</a>.
-				Libreboot follows the <a href="https://gnu.org/">GNU project</a> in attempting to create
-				a world where everyone has the freedom to use, study, adapt and share software. In other words: to truly own and control the technology that they use.
-			</p>
-			<p>
-				<strong><em>FCC in the USA is trying to make free software in WiFi-enabled devices illegal!
-				Visit <a href="http://savewifi.org/">SaveWifi.org</a> to learn more, and to find out what you can do about it. 
-				Europeans, read <a href="https://juliareda.eu/2015/10/dear-european-governments-dont-endanger-free-and-open-wifi-networks/">this article</a> and <a href="https://blog.tohojo.dk/2015/10/the-new-wifi-regulations-in-europe.html">this article</a>. These
-				new laws will have serious and damaging consequences for libreboot, if they are allowed to pass!</em></strong>
+				<strong><em>FCC in the USA is trying to *ban* free WiFi devices!
+				Learn more at <a href="http://savewifi.org/">SaveWifi.org</a>. Europeans,
+				read <a href="https://juliareda.eu/2015/10/dear-european-governments-dont-endanger-free-and-open-wifi-networks/">this article</a> and <a href="https://blog.tohojo.dk/2015/10/the-new-wifi-regulations-in-europe.html">this article</a>. Please act now! Libreboot is at risk with these new proposals.</em></strong>
 			</p>
 			<h2>Download libreboot</h2>
 				<ul>
 					<li><strong><a href="download/"><?php echo gettext("Download stable version"); ?></a></strong></li>
-					<li><a href="git/"><?php echo gettext("Download development version (git repositories)"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="git/"><?php echo gettext("Git repositories"); ?></a></li>
 					<li><a href="gpg/"><?php echo gettext("GPG keys"); ?></a></li>
 					<li><a href="rsync/"><?php echo gettext("Mirroring libreboot"); ?> (rsync)</a></li>
 				</ul>
 			<h2>Information</h2>
 				<ul>
 					<li><a href="docs/index.html"><?php echo gettext("Documentation"); ?></a></li>
-					<li><a href="docs/hcl/index.html#supported_list"><?php echo gettext("List of supported systems"); ?></a></li>
-					<li><a href="docs/install/index.html"><?php echo gettext("How to install libreboot"); ?></a></li>
-					<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_boot_installer.html"><?php echo gettext("How to install GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
-					<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html"><?php echo gettext("How to boot GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="docs/hcl/index.html#supported_list"><?php echo gettext("Compatibility list"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="docs/install/index.html"><?php echo gettext("Installing libreboot"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_boot_installer.html"><?php echo gettext("Installing GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
+					<li><a href="docs/gnulinux/grub_cbfs.html"><?php echo gettext("Booting GNU/Linux"); ?></a></li>
 				</ul>
 				<ul>
 					<li><strong><a href="faq/">Frequently Asked Questions (and answers to those questions)</a></strong></li>
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