From 161fe8e7ac4d644c5b204af86033c5ccf6fb83fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francis Rowe <fchmmr@minifree.lan>
Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2015 12:07:04 -0500
Subject: home page: optimize search engine keywords in first paragraph

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diff --git a/site/index.php b/site/index.php
index 0d1bd87..866fc5b 100644
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+++ b/site/index.php
@@ -39,10 +39,9 @@
 		</p>
 		<h1><?php echo gettext("Libreboot project"); ?></h1>
 			<p>
-				Libreboot is <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/what-is-free-software">free</a> (as in freedom) boot firmware based on <a href="http://coreboot.org/">coreboot</a>,
-				intended to replace the proprietary <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BIOS">BIOS</a> or <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unified_Extensible_Firmware_Interface">UEFI</a> firmware.
-				Boot firmware is the low-level software that runs when you turn your computer on, which initializes the
-				hardware and starts a bootloader for your operating system. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
+				Libreboot is a free BIOS or UEFI firmware replacement (<a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free as in freedom</a>), 
+				based on <a href="http://coreboot.org/">coreboot</a>. We refer to libreboot as <em>boot firmware</em>, low-level software
+				that runs when you turn your computer on, which initializes the hardware and starts a bootloader for your operating system. <a href="docs/index.html#why">Learn more</a>
 			</p>
 			<p>
 				Most people in the global <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> community are using free operating systems; namely, the <a href="https://gnu.org/">GNU operating system</a>.
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